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The Philosophy of Jennifer by ~jnr0884:iconjnr0884:

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I'm so broken inside
can't sleep at night
I can't be me because I see
shattered visions - fragmentations
manifestations of failed possible perfect tomorrows
millions of dreams falling on the able shoulders
of a kid that can't manage his own life
and the painful slicing of the knife - stress -
and the stress, phenomenal stress
but I love the fight
    the pressing feeling of guilt.
and I love the confusion - confusion?
    is it possible to be more confused?

Can you imagine a world
      without pain
      without failure
      without hatred
      without God
      without anything. . .

      without anything other than 8 billion people with
      NO   FUCKING   PURPOSE? (!)

But yeah, seriously dude, we're going out again on Thursday night.  And let me tell ya, broseph, she is smokin'.
©2007-2009 ~jnr0884
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Mood: Wow! ~lucciolaa:iconlucciolaa: Jan 22, 2007, 8:55:43 AM
A world without pain it's imposible, pain help us feeling alive, it's better to feel pain than to not feel anything.

Beautiful poem.

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~Photo-Moe:iconPhoto-Moe: Jan 22, 2007, 9:22:28 AM
fab! just... speechless!

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*LindaLee:iconLindaLee: Jan 22, 2007, 4:53:35 PM
That's what you get when you ask for free will.. I bet He's laughing at all of us....... or perhaps crying?

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~gazzal:icongazzal: Jan 22, 2007, 10:05:14 PM
You got me from the first line.

And yes, I can imagine.
Mood: Screwed ~jet8402:iconjet8402: Jan 23, 2007, 1:48:13 PM
powerful.... to the bone.


you've really surpassed yourself with this one

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~jnr0884:iconjnr0884: Jan 24, 2007, 3:26:38 PM
Thank you, and I agree - living without pain isn't living.

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There's high, and there's high, and to get really high--I mean so high that you can walk on the water, that high--that's where I'm goin - George Harrison

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~jnr0884:iconjnr0884: Jan 25, 2007, 8:12:02 AM
Thanks.. :peace:

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There's high, and there's high, and to get really high--I mean so high that you can walk on the water, that high--that's where I'm goin - George Harrison

Oh, just click the link already.. ~jnr0884
~jnr0884:iconjnr0884: Jan 25, 2007, 8:12:23 AM
Maybe a combination of both?

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There's high, and there's high, and to get really high--I mean so high that you can walk on the water, that high--that's where I'm goin - George Harrison

Oh, just click the link already.. ~jnr0884
~jnr0884:iconjnr0884: Jan 25, 2007, 8:12:41 AM
:) Thanks

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There's high, and there's high, and to get really high--I mean so high that you can walk on the water, that high--that's where I'm goin - George Harrison

Oh, just click the link already.. ~jnr0884
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